Week 4

[xeverettx]

Ok the next topic is..


Revenge


thats all i could come up with right now, have fun with it guys

[Luc]

revenge


oh so sweet, will your blood, taste apon my hands,
oh how sweet, will your screams, ring in my ears.
oh wonderfully sweet, when your under the land,
how lovely it is, to finally ease away my fears.

(revenge is a hard topic )

[xeverettx]

yeah it is hard, should i change the topic?

[bench]

nope don't change it1 It should be a challenge! Hehehe By the way, congratulations everett! That was a good poem you wrote back there!

[bench]

Karma

You've hurt me
You've found somebody else
And I am consumed by anger
As I see you living a life
Of lie
Trying to be happy when
You are really not
Shoving it in my face
That I am alone
And you are not.

But look at you now
So sad and alone
You've been left too
For somebody else
How you must feel
That pain that once
Consumed me
Yet this time in
Karmic proportions.

[Brenda Michelle]

you shouldnt change it!! and congrats again!!! here is my poem:

She

She's loud
She's annoying
She tells everyone what to do
She pushes
She shoves
but yet she won't budge
She screams
She yells
She's getting on my nerves
she hits
She fights
And I'm hitting right back
She's falling
She's bleeding
What have I done
She's cold
She stop breathing
And thats how she will stay.

p.s i dont know if its ok, but this poem i had written earlyer and posted on the site, is it ok if i use it here 2?

[rubydragon]

Dangerous Motive


Once again I'm on the ground
You hurt me now here I lie,
My heart shattered turning cold
another tear for you I cry,
feeling pity for the way you are
my soul now has another scar,

Feeling the warmth of the sun
as it sets and goes down,
taking my love I had for you
taking my smile and making me frown,
now the blood spills across the glass
as my head crashes through the past,

Anger takes hold of my throat
as the tears keep flowing from me,
the feeling of blood and tears, with the hatred,
now I realise where I need to be,
Revenge is a dangerous motive, a hold I will take
Through despair, this time it's your heart that will break!!

[Futantxx]

Here's my submission:

crouched above you
soaked in your crimson velvet
watching you suffocate and choke
on your own icy existance
I've never known this feeling.

lurked in your shadows far too long
shoved it down in, far beneath the wounds
now all that's left behind
is a lifeless torment.
who'd have thought it would end like this?

I've felt it all along

[Leah06]

i cant write on this topic so i will not be particiating this week. Good Luck everyone!

[Seizure]

i will enter after my finals and projects are finished.... when does this topic end?