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ok, i tryed to think of a challeging topic. and here is what i came up with...... this weeks topic is

BETRAYAL


Well, good luck to all...... ( and have fun!!!!)

Brenda Michelle

This has proven to be a difficult topic. As of today, there has only been my entry and I know it is not good. I had to open up many healed wounds to find inspiration for this. Here goes:


Now I Have Nothing


I loved you with all my life
Yet you loved someone else.
You know how it pains me
Like you cut me with a knife.

We made a promise, you and I
To love each other forever.
We'll overcome all our problems
Our love will never die.

But why when I turned my back
You stabbed me with a knife.
You bedded with somebody else
My being, with infidelity, you hack.

I asked myself why you did this to me?
Is it what I cannot give
That made you change your mind
And make your affections for me flee?

I gave you everything
My whole heart, life and soul.
Now you've left me dry
Now I have nothing.

that is very good bench! i really like it, do you think my topic is really hard? hmm it is already thursday and you are the only one.........

actually i've just been too lazy to think of anything as of yet! hehe...well here's mine, then!

Still You Betrayed

I can't protect you anymore,
you gave my heart a painful sore,
your intentions are now so clear
why couldn't I see that I lived in fear?

The love you gave me was to be cherished
but now that love has surely perished,
I used to feel that wonderful surprise
every time you looked into my eyes.

You masked your feelings, tied a knot
smiled a smile that forever I sought,
and then you broke it, and let it all go,
now of your true feelings, i surely know.

Now that it's over, I've nothing to give,
and my body is weakened, hating to live.
I gave you my life, my heart, my whole,
and still you betrayed me, ripped apart my soul.

So now I stand before you, to draw a truce,
to mend my heart, from my body, completely loose,
and still you cannot see the aching pain I hold,
from the false reasons that you so happily told.



*RinRin*

Wow rin rin, i really like your too. both of you i can tell put alot of feeling into your work.

I would have put one up, but I was just selected, so I don't think it would be right for me to try again immediately afterward.

go head and put one up..... i love to read poetry..

thank you brenda!

*RinRin*

Thanks Brenda!

You are both very welcome. i enjoy reading others poems, and you 2 write freat poems. you are wonderful poets.