alright i kinda wana try one of them "group poems" so i thought bout this... everyone add one line to the poem all i got so far is 4 lines of my own..
i love the way you play your guitar
i love the way we lay and stair at the stars
i love our late night talks on the phone
i love our talks about what we wanted to own
im writing a poem can u help
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im writing a poem can u help
by ryan » Sat Aug 16, 2003 1:07 am
"To live is to die, it is my destiny" - seizure
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by Seizure » Sat Aug 16, 2003 1:34 am
My addition... left hanging at the end for someone to run with.
I love the life you put me through
You seemed to know just what to do
I close my eyes and see you there
This life is now for us to share
I hope we never fall apart
If we did it'd break my heart
And you should know I'd give it all
To make you glad, even a small
Amount of time, my life is yours
Nothing splits us, not even wars
You know it's true, we'll last for years
And wipe away, each other's tears
This love I show, I hope you trust
And do not view it with disgust
I love the life you put me through
You seemed to know just what to do
I close my eyes and see you there
This life is now for us to share
I hope we never fall apart
If we did it'd break my heart
And you should know I'd give it all
To make you glad, even a small
Amount of time, my life is yours
Nothing splits us, not even wars
You know it's true, we'll last for years
And wipe away, each other's tears
This love I show, I hope you trust
And do not view it with disgust
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
-Seizure
-Seizure
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by Leah06 » Sat Aug 16, 2003 8:45 pm
i dream of you
wishing you were hear
thinking of you always
my heart holds you dear.
Even after death
My love will live for you
Hopefully someday
You will love me too.
(sorry its not that good, i am kinda out of it. my feelings wont get hurt if you dont like it or dont use it or whatever)
wishing you were hear
thinking of you always
my heart holds you dear.
Even after death
My love will live for you
Hopefully someday
You will love me too.
(sorry its not that good, i am kinda out of it. my feelings wont get hurt if you dont like it or dont use it or whatever)
What you do with your life is only half of the equation, the other half, the more important half, is who you're with when you're doing it.
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by bench » Mon Aug 18, 2003 3:32 am
now i live the way you play your guitar
i live the way we lay and stare at the stars
i live our late night talks on the phone
i live our talks about what we wanted to own
i live the life that we are suppose to share
i live it to the fullest, i don't reall care
even if this takes me to forever
you'll be the only i'll cherish and remember
i live the way we lay and stare at the stars
i live our late night talks on the phone
i live our talks about what we wanted to own
i live the life that we are suppose to share
i live it to the fullest, i don't reall care
even if this takes me to forever
you'll be the only i'll cherish and remember
Live Life, Love Life
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by Hopefull » Tue Oct 21, 2003 1:18 am
Seizure wrote:My addition... left hanging at the end for someone to run with.
I love the life you put me through
You seemed to know just what to do
I close my eyes and see you there
This life is now for us to share
I hope we never fall apart
If we did it'd break my heart
And you should know I'd give it all
To make you glad, even a small
Amount of time, my life is yours
Nothing splits us, not even wars
You know it's true, we'll last for years
And wipe away, each other's tears
This love I show, I hope you trust
And do not view it with disgust
For tomorrow we'll both be,
In each others arms don't you agree,
Always smile, kiss and make up before the sun sets, tomorrow is another day and life is to short
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