Well, i guess it is time to pick this weeks topic...
Drum roll Please...
i am going to say ANGELS.... Any kind. maybe it can be a love one or it can be about a angel from GOD or somthing of that nature....
Have fun and enjoy writing...
WeEk 23...
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by Brenda Michelle » Tue Jun 22, 2004 8:42 pm
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by Leah06 » Wed Jun 23, 2004 1:20 pm
ohh this will be fun, i need to get back into writing...
What you do with your life is only half of the equation, the other half, the more important half, is who you're with when you're doing it.
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by Brett » Tue Jun 29, 2004 9:23 pm
I think Angels can be in eye on the beholder. Quite simply because they have God's Angels which everyone knows about, but then their are some people who have friends or family which they consider Angels in their opinion.
My best friend is an Angel in my eye
My best friend is an Angel in my eye
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by LinzAy » Wed Jun 30, 2004 7:39 pm
Masked Angel
Beneath the ugly words I say
Beneath the chilling looks I give
Beneath all my actions that are completely wrong
You see the angel inside of me that lives
Behind everything wrong I've done to everyone
Behind my anger that has lasted so long
Behind my negative self presentation
You see the angel inside of me that stands strong
In every mistake I've made
In every horrible thing I do
In every wrong attempt I make
You see the angel in me that tries so hard to shine through
Beneath the ugly words I say
Beneath the chilling looks I give
Beneath all my actions that are completely wrong
You see the angel inside of me that lives
Behind everything wrong I've done to everyone
Behind my anger that has lasted so long
Behind my negative self presentation
You see the angel inside of me that stands strong
In every mistake I've made
In every horrible thing I do
In every wrong attempt I make
You see the angel in me that tries so hard to shine through
~The Greatest Thing You'll Ever Learn Is Just To Love And Be Loved In Return~
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by Leah06 » Tue Jul 06, 2004 5:57 pm
Saved
We have made it through so much
Found each other 2 years ago
Was it fate or destiny
I guess we’ll never know.
You have done so much for me
Helping me through it all
You were there to cushion me
When at rough times I would fall.
You’ve always kept me smiling
Even when I’d cry
You have made me feel so special
You’ve caused my tears to dry.
I will always love you
I hope this will never end
I live for the day we will be side by side
You are my angel and my friend.
You are my shining star
Even though you are far away
I swear that I will love you my angel
Through out each and every day.
We have made it through so much
Found each other 2 years ago
Was it fate or destiny
I guess we’ll never know.
You have done so much for me
Helping me through it all
You were there to cushion me
When at rough times I would fall.
You’ve always kept me smiling
Even when I’d cry
You have made me feel so special
You’ve caused my tears to dry.
I will always love you
I hope this will never end
I live for the day we will be side by side
You are my angel and my friend.
You are my shining star
Even though you are far away
I swear that I will love you my angel
Through out each and every day.
What you do with your life is only half of the equation, the other half, the more important half, is who you're with when you're doing it.
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by Seizure » Thu Jul 08, 2004 3:33 am
On My Own
I lay on my back, I peer at the sky
I think about God and I ask him why
The world is so hard, there is not a soul
That could help the earth, when can we parole?
There's not a hero, it all will get worse
It's like to be human is to live a curse
When the world dies, what will come of us?
When the world dies, just who can we trust?
I asked for a guide, I wished for the light
No angel showed, did I do it right?
I guess I know now, I must help myself
Be my own angel with hope on the shelf
I have always known to live my life true
I have always known what I should persue
But I know that I will be on my own
I'll continue life, out here all alone
I lay on my back, I peer at the sky
I think about God and I ask him why
The world is so hard, there is not a soul
That could help the earth, when can we parole?
There's not a hero, it all will get worse
It's like to be human is to live a curse
When the world dies, what will come of us?
When the world dies, just who can we trust?
I asked for a guide, I wished for the light
No angel showed, did I do it right?
I guess I know now, I must help myself
Be my own angel with hope on the shelf
I have always known to live my life true
I have always known what I should persue
But I know that I will be on my own
I'll continue life, out here all alone
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
-Seizure
-Seizure
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by Brenda Michelle » Sun Jul 11, 2004 6:41 pm
I am going to pick...... Seizure.... i thought that the poems were great but Seizure really caught my attention when he said he was his own angel and how he is all alone in the world, there to help himslef be good.... that really means alot... I also liked linzay's poem and how she persuaded me that she was really was trying to do good after all the wrong things not only herself but others too, that she was a good person no matter what...
great poem you guys..
great poem you guys..
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