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Week 30
Posted:
Tue Oct 19, 2004 12:07 pmby Dreamer
Okay I got one.. A bit more of a challenge..
I want a personification poem where the thing you are personifying is the speaker in the poem.. but we don't know what you are till the last line of the poem.
Personification is making something un-human have human feelings and emotions and charecteristics
(ie: "I have many branches" You are the Tree speaking)
perfect example of this can be found in my poem:
Such is Life
http://www.dreamersreality.com/poetic/view_poem.php?pid=5614
This should be fun and interesting to read and to write.....
Posted:
Mon Nov 01, 2004 10:36 amby LinzAy
You stab me with you fingertips.
Emotionally bound to what you see.
Only....it's not me.
Your wine spills all over me.
I'm blood red for a minute thick..
And now importants parts of me stick.
I'm so worn
All that describes me is fading
I'm fading.
You know me by heart
Even though I'm mostly not what you see
I guess that's the way a keyboards life is suppose to be.
Posted:
Wed Nov 03, 2004 8:45 pmby Leah06
ok i got one,
No eyes,
No libs,
It's dark,
And cold.
It's hard to move,
If i try to wriggle,
I can inch a little bit
Further.
The longer i get,
The more pressure i feel
Coming down
Upon me.
The more dirt i eat,
The further i sink
Into the earth.
Little hands grab at me
Bringing me to the surface
The sun kills me.
What am i?
Posted:
Wed Nov 03, 2004 10:05 pmby Visionary
A WORM
Posted:
Wed Nov 03, 2004 10:27 pmby Visionary
I am the sun
I am the rain
I am happiness
I am pain
I am the air you breath
I am the water you drink
I am every color of a rainbow
I make you think
I am a medow
I am a beach
I am a prairie
I am a mountains highest peak
I am everwhere
I am in everything
I am your footsteps
I am your voice when you sing
Your probably wondering what I am
But you should be asking WHO
You have to look for me
Or ask....... WHAT WOULD I DO.
Posted:
Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:54 amby Leah06
Im glad you got it right.
I think your is JESUS. pretty sure, not to sure.
Posted:
Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:00 amby Visionary
your right also!
Posted:
Fri Nov 05, 2004 4:50 amby Dreamer
see if we have anymore takers and i will call it tomorrow..... good ones so far..
Posted:
Wed Nov 10, 2004 8:49 pmby Visionary
EVER HEAR THAT SONG BY GARTH BROOKS.....IF TOMORROW NEVER COMES?....HMMMMM.
Posted:
Fri Nov 12, 2004 11:41 amby Visionary
Hey LinzAy. Why don't you call the winner since your the first one to post a poem. Dreamer must have some important stuff going on in her life and is to busy to pick a winner. Feel free to pick your own if you think it's best...(if this is acceptable to Leah also?) Lets just keep this thing going! Just a thought? Later