BenLaney wrote:You guys are nice!!!
I'm not.
BenLaney wrote: I will have to allow my serious side an outlet, too!!
Is the poetry you're posting on the main page serious then? Or in a joking manner such as these recent short poems?
The newcomer playin' around
by Seizure » Thu Jun 12, 2003 7:49 am
I'm not.
Is the poetry you're posting on the main page serious then? Or in a joking manner such as these recent short poems?
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
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by Seizure » Thu Jun 12, 2003 8:03 am
Hey Ben... I just checked out your site and peeped your samples for, "Crazy Dreams," "Precious Little Hearts," and "Long Black Ribbon of Road." Definately not my taste of music but I can appreciate the talent behind it. I noticed your record came out in 2000, I hope that doesn't mean you gave up the music thing dropping your last one 3 years ago. If you did, I hope you get back into it... music is quite the outlet.
Keep doing your thing...
Keep doing your thing...
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
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by BenLaney » Thu Jun 12, 2003 2:31 pm
Yeah Seizure!!
No, I haven't given up the recording or performing arts quite yet!! (SOMEBODY STOP ME, PLEASE!!! Ha! Ha!) I'm working on a Cd now that is nearing completion. One more month, maybe?....I've been working with with a female friend, Aprylle Gilbert, (I've known her for 12 years) doing shows around Santa Cruz, Ca. I am an indie artist, however, and I am still growing and stretching (and trying to be more real and honest!!! Ha! Ha!) but I have an over active imagination and other interests as well!!! This poetry thing is inspiring me, too!! I have mood swings that amaze me. I do get almost out of control with the creative "crazies" at times!! Ha! Ha! Haaaaaa!! I do have my serious side as well and will be posting some as time allows. Now, as you see, I've got a big mouth, too!!! But I want to thank you for the words of encouragement. I guess you know how much that can mean to an artist who is touched in the head!!!Keep Rockin' n shreddin' n fix your eyes on where yer headin'!!!!
No, I haven't given up the recording or performing arts quite yet!! (SOMEBODY STOP ME, PLEASE!!! Ha! Ha!) I'm working on a Cd now that is nearing completion. One more month, maybe?....I've been working with with a female friend, Aprylle Gilbert, (I've known her for 12 years) doing shows around Santa Cruz, Ca. I am an indie artist, however, and I am still growing and stretching (and trying to be more real and honest!!! Ha! Ha!) but I have an over active imagination and other interests as well!!! This poetry thing is inspiring me, too!! I have mood swings that amaze me. I do get almost out of control with the creative "crazies" at times!! Ha! Ha! Haaaaaa!! I do have my serious side as well and will be posting some as time allows. Now, as you see, I've got a big mouth, too!!! But I want to thank you for the words of encouragement. I guess you know how much that can mean to an artist who is touched in the head!!!Keep Rockin' n shreddin' n fix your eyes on where yer headin'!!!!
"I was thinking something
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
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by BenLaney » Thu Jun 12, 2003 2:43 pm
Hey Leah06!!
Now you are making me blush
As red blood to my face does rush
You are causing more poetry to gush
Oh, please, please don't you ever hush!!!
You are an interesting 1, 2, uuuuuuu!!!!! Thanks, Leah06!!!!!!
Now you are making me blush
As red blood to my face does rush
You are causing more poetry to gush
Oh, please, please don't you ever hush!!!
You are an interesting 1, 2, uuuuuuu!!!!! Thanks, Leah06!!!!!!
"I was thinking something
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
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by BenLaney » Thu Jun 12, 2003 3:04 pm
Hey LinzAy!!!
May laughter come your way
May you see something funny every day
That's all this silly poem has to say
May laughter come your way!!!
You can laugh at me and with me at the same time
Go ahead LindzAy, I'm glad you like a humorous ryhme
Your quote is sooooooo TRUE!!! In this or any other galaxy, only LOVE brings real ecstasy!!!!!
May laughter come your way
May you see something funny every day
That's all this silly poem has to say
May laughter come your way!!!
You can laugh at me and with me at the same time
Go ahead LindzAy, I'm glad you like a humorous ryhme
Your quote is sooooooo TRUE!!! In this or any other galaxy, only LOVE brings real ecstasy!!!!!
"I was thinking something
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
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by Brenda Michelle » Thu Jun 12, 2003 9:00 pm
BenLaney:
you desreve alot of friendly hello's!
you are 1 kool dude!!
i hope you enjoy it at dreamers reality
cause i know i do!!
(danmm you know how long it took me to write that?)
you desreve alot of friendly hello's!
you are 1 kool dude!!
i hope you enjoy it at dreamers reality
cause i know i do!!
(danmm you know how long it took me to write that?)
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Do Tell, Do Tell Brenda Michelle!!
by BenLaney » Fri Jun 13, 2003 12:39 am
When I was young
Someone handed me
A book filled up
With crazy poetry
I dove into that book
Now just take a look
I've still got the stuff
aaaall over me!!
Hey Brenda Michelle!! Which one was longer.......the chicken or the egg??
Oh waaaaaaait!! (That's not how that goes, is it?) Hey, I used to live near an eggplant!!! That's probably what happened to me!!! Ha! Ha!!! It ain't no crime....to take a little time.....To tell you that I'm......Enjoying your ryhme.
Yes, and yes!! I'm enjoying this!! Thank you!
Someone handed me
A book filled up
With crazy poetry
I dove into that book
Now just take a look
I've still got the stuff
aaaall over me!!
Hey Brenda Michelle!! Which one was longer.......the chicken or the egg??
Oh waaaaaaait!! (That's not how that goes, is it?) Hey, I used to live near an eggplant!!! That's probably what happened to me!!! Ha! Ha!!! It ain't no crime....to take a little time.....To tell you that I'm......Enjoying your ryhme.
Yes, and yes!! I'm enjoying this!! Thank you!
"I was thinking something
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
But brought the thought to a stop
Because I suddenly realized
I can't afford for another brain-cell to POP!
Or to get busted by a poetry cop
For teaching a one-legged dancer to bop!!"
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by bench » Fri Jun 13, 2003 1:36 am
Hey ben!
Was new too a few poems ago
Isn't it amazing how things here are so?
I write poems, yes the hell I do
But not everyone appreciates them, that is true.
At least here in dreamers reality, people are nice
They could care less if my poems don't rhyme (hehehehe)
Like everyone else, I'm amazed with you
Probably you can put into music my poems too! (wishful thinking!)
Yup, I've read what you've written
And boy, they got me smitten.
Hope to read more!
Was new too a few poems ago
Isn't it amazing how things here are so?
I write poems, yes the hell I do
But not everyone appreciates them, that is true.
At least here in dreamers reality, people are nice
They could care less if my poems don't rhyme (hehehehe)
Like everyone else, I'm amazed with you
Probably you can put into music my poems too! (wishful thinking!)
Yup, I've read what you've written
And boy, they got me smitten.
Hope to read more!
Live Life, Love Life
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