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Times End
6 June, 2005
Author: Series100

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i tie the rope
i move the chair
i sigh with my last
breath of air
i see the dark
with a pinch of light
the angels singing
with all their might
then i awake
so tired and weak
grasping the hand
next to me
please god dont let me die
i want to live i want to try
its dark in here
the air so thin
could this really
be the end?

------- Author's Notes -------

sometimes life can really drag you down.

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BIzza (68.100.180.56) -- Wednesday, July 6 2005, 01:15 am

Awesome

Series100 that is very true. Life has it's ups but when you think you dont want to go on. There is always something that keeps you going. Even if it seems like it's worthless. Great writing. Keep it up.!!!
 
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