vinebar

Ghost
7 June, 2005
Author: Holly

vinebar

I think I’m alive, yet I’m not really here,
I’ve slipped out of reality.
Thought of as someone was merely “once was”.
Labelled by my fatality.

I’ve got so much to say, I’m screaming out,
But my voice is heard by none.
I’m writing my heart all over the walls,
But the bloods fades, my work is undone.

My hands are so bitterly cold,
And my face so pale and gaunt,
My feet never seem to touch the ground,
Of these lonely halls I haunt.

I’d sell my own soul to breathe again,
But I’ve nothing left to sell.
I spend my days cursing and wishing,
Caught between heaven and hell.

I’m a faceless, shapeless entity,
Drained of everything but pain,
Haunted by the very fact,
I know I’ll never live again.

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem kind of describes how I feel too.

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (172.170.125.77) -- Tuesday, June 7 2005, 08:11 pm

Mrs. Talent

Hey Holly! Ghost---you describe it so well in your poetry, you write so profoundly with a lot of detail! You go girl! All your projects, creations, and works are just super super! I had to say it twice, it's just that nice!
Mike (82.35.78.155) -- Friday, June 10 2005, 06:07 pm

..

"I’m writing my heart all over the walls,
But the bloods fades, my work is undone."

I love those two lines.
Colin (69.157.21.2) -- Monday, April 20 2009, 03:08 am

Well I've just brought a GHOST back to life.....

Well I've just brought a GHOST back to life and it's a story worth reading! And as a writer/poet I don't think YOUR WORK WILL EVER BE UNDONE!
This is a classic ghost story - but I hope you never come back to haunt me! Your words are just too scary! Even four years later!
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Holly

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2021-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.