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9 June, 2005
Author: Shorty

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These tears inside are binding
while striving for the light
now they fall all the way
none more stopped by your soft lips
I'm attatched to you by something I've never known
much stronger than my will
but no matter how much I try
sometimes I can't help but cry

I look at you and wonder
how we can be this way
we hide what we had like it never happened
Love is so addicting
and yet so revolting
everyoe who loves eventually gets hurt
im all alone

my head tells me no one is worth it
to ignore my inner desires
my heart breaks but still doesnt want to be alone
My heart has hope that there is someone better out there
my head tells me everyone is the same
either way im hurting
what is there to gain?

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Angel in Tears (86.135.149.154) -- Thursday, June 9 2005, 09:20 pm

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I love this poem...even more from the fourth line, in stanza two, up until the end of the poem! I know that everybody says "You will move on. You will get better. "But I would have to agree with everyone. The thing you gain could be experience in how to deal with your feelings if it were to happen again.
 
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