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2nd Place
14 June, 2005
Author: Casey

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Getting 2nd place
Doesn’t always feel great
It might be a race
To me, it’s second rate

I’ve been there before
Down that road
It comes more and more
It’s a familiar road

It’s not a race
It’s not a sport
Just looking for a place
In my sister’s heart

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Taylor james (81.138.52.139) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 08:49 pm

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awww,casey thats a real good poem, and i know how it feels but not with my sister, itd with my mum, this is really good
Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Wednesday, June 15 2005, 05:17 pm

At first...

I thought this was a poem about a race, or a competition. Being 2nd place in any family members life is indeed terrible. It doesn't feel good when kin behave toward you as if you were a stranger. Breathtaking poem!
 
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