She Took Her Love Away
17 June, 2005
Author: Terrie*
you took my heart
you let it drop
you walked away
when it fell apart
you took my heart
you drained it's love
looked at me
and walked away
you took my heart
not worth much to you
you glanced one more time
to make sure
no one else saw
what you just did
you took my heart
you made it cry
you broke my heart
you turned around
then laughed at me
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Comments on this poem/writing:
Clive (70.57.142.192) -- Saturday, June 18 2005, 03:29 am Never do you forget when your heart is crushed |
Terrie* (66.81.137.188) -- Saturday, June 18 2005, 05:19 am one just remember's to forget, a bad love.. sad isn't it? that there are such that control and create soooo much harm upon another innocent heart...thanx |
Joyce Ivy (68.19.179.94) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 06:39 am Terri this is a sad write...broken hearts are hard to mend...good work girl |
Terrie* (66.81.131.130) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 07:03 am thanx, yea one of my male friends had some bad luck awhile back and well he's rollin' again i won't let him give up..friends are ther til the bitter end.. |
Joyce Ivy (68.19.179.94) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 09:36 pm friends are always good to have...love ya work... |
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