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Guilt Trip
23 June, 2005
Author: Mike

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I didn't do it!
(It was your fault.)

It wasn't me!
(You caused it.)

It would have happened anyway!
(You could have stopped it.)

NO!

(YES! YOU DID IT!
YOU FOOL!
YOU BAS***D!
IT WAS YOU!)

No, please.

(I hope you suffer.
Live with it until you die.
Your life is in turmoil.
You deserve it.
SUFFER!)

Please..
No..
Please.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.203) -- Thursday, June 23 2005, 05:40 pm

creative

I love your poem Mike! I also like the dialogue you've got going on there. If I'm not mistaken, is it between you and your conscious? Either way, it's still really good!
Holly (82.34.160.81) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 12:35 pm

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Haha, I didn't realise it was your conscience until she mentioned it. :( I think it's brilliant.
Mike (82.35.78.155) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 02:56 pm

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Yep, it's my conscience I'm arguing with there.. This one took a while to write, though it's so short. I couldn't seem to get my feelings onto paper. Glad you understood it.
barb (209.112.24.86) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 04:18 pm

good point

Good writing. short and to the point. I liked it.
 
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