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Lost In You
3 November, 2003
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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I hear your voice inside my thoughts,
Still not sure which way to go,
I deserve more, you say.
Is that not for me to choose?
If I stay will you take my hand,
I'll be your strength,
You’ll be my guide.
Take my hand,
I'll hold on tight,
I trust in you,
And that will grow,
You’re all I need, all I want.
Together we blossom,
Together we grow,
You and I were ment to know.
We share each other,
You know my thoughts,
I feel your fears,
And can wipe your tears.
Know I'm here,
My heart beating for you,
Together hand in hand we'll be.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.147.241.53) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 06:55 pm

beautiful and touching....Clive

i just love your poems...they are soooo romantic....continue sharing...
Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 09:30 pm

Clive...

This is a great poem, i enjoyed it verry much. Kepp this kind of poetry coming and ill be shure to read and comment. Great job!

Leah Kendall
Teri (208.132.18.179) -- Wednesday, November 5 2003, 10:11 pm

awsome poem

you can feel the love in your writing.
Anna Juarez (216.234.195.236) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 09:24 pm

Heartfelt

Truly a heartfelt poem but also it makes one stop and think about the nature of relationships, the pairing, successful bonding and, unfortunately, some people's unwillingness to make an effort. One of my favorite poems on this site.
amy ringshall (90.240.228.63) -- Sunday, January 20 2008, 01:54 pm

i love you

This poem is touching
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devyn (68.80.5.164) -- Sunday, March 3 2013, 10:47 pm

touching

this poem is very touching
 
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