Bye My Love by Clive B Ringshall

Do you know how much I hurt?
Do you care at all?
I came with an open heart
You took it, used the love for your own mean,
You did not throw it away but put it back used,
No life any longer, can I feel?
Not the way I used to,
I hurt will I feel the way I used to?
I want to feel, I want to trust,
Here you are,
Talk to me, put this lie right,
You cannot,
You asked for my trust,
I gave it without asking,
You took it to show me how not to trust,
Is there more you need before I go?
Because it's sad to know I'd give it without question,
Did you know just how much I loved you?
Do you know how much you lost tonight?
Bye my love

Terrie* (65.148.233.248) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 02:01 am

DEEP...
even though i find the form of this poem extremely good....i hope it was not aquired by experience....your a gifted writer Clive. Terrie*

anonymous (63.184.0.139, 2) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 08:02 am

no title
I'm glad you like, yes most of my words are from my life so far, this one was an experience, but life goes on Thank YOu

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