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Such A Juvenile
30 June, 2005
Author: Mere

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What do I call this feeling,
Manic Depression damned?
Who shall I tell these cruel word,
That seem adrift and crammed.
A silent pain that fails to end,
No one can feel this more,
No one can see the lack of love,
That is, until I hit the floor.
A break of heart that's not been solved,
Or strictly my own fate?
Am I blessed or am I cursed,
Or is it simply hate?
Of course I'm dying for no reason,
You act like you're not fazed,
I see that I've created this,
At first I was amazed.
Have I brought this upon myself?
Surely not, that is what I think,
A never-ending chain has broken up,
Now I'm the missing link.
I get lost in my mind and can't escape,
But I do not know why,
I'll hide in my little corner,
An unwatered plant, I shall die.
The hell with life, I'm sick of this,
Why do I think this way?
I can't help this, I will just quit,
And let my mind decay.
Your words are whisperous, and I don't listen,
Because I do not care,
A dream in which I can't ignore,
A f***ed up child's nightmare.
But what do you say? I need help?
I think I do not,
On a colorless page of writing,
I am the darkest ink blot.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (70.97.74.245) -- Friday, July 8 2005, 02:52 am

Mere!

I just read all 5 of your poems. They were amazing! I just loved them all. I love the last two lines! for some reason!... keep it up! i'm here if you need me. peace stay strong
cep (66.65.71.153) -- Thursday, March 8 2007, 11:45 pm

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i love ur juvenile poem... can i use it???? in my paper as an example of juvenile research
Roberta Braswell (151.204.41.17) -- Wednesday, October 17 2007, 02:18 pm

i can relate

it's like we have so much in common based on our life and the poems we write. Yeah i'm popular but when people read my poems they think that I'm crazy. I bet that's you too
 
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