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I Feel So Lonely
11 July, 2005
Author: Taylor James

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i feel so lonely deep in my heart
don't know whats missing
i feel i've been torn apart.

i want to be with someone
but they don't want me,
i dont really blame them,
i mean look at the one you see.

look at how ugly i am
look at what i'll never be,
i want to be with someone
to share my hopes and dreams.

a man who loves me for me
but that will never happen
to someone like me.

i used to believe in fairytales
i thought my dreams would come true
now i know that it was all lies
but all i've ever done is to try and try and try.

now i know the truth
i know my dreams will fail
i know the fairytales will become a distant memory.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (70.97.74.245) -- Tuesday, July 12 2005, 07:17 pm

wow!

speechless. I loved it! great job. keep it up girl! keep writing love ya!
Leah g (204.112.168.39) -- Tuesday, August 9 2005, 11:23 pm

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your last line is how i feel ( i know the fairytales will become a distant memory) great poem!
 
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