Simplicity
12 July, 2005
Author: Holly
Never mind the stars in the night,
Complemented by silky moonlight.
Never mind the reflections in the ocean,
Which seem to signify some sort of emotion.
Never mind the carressing breeze,
Fermenting ripples across the seas.
Never mind all that romantic imagery,
And words such as "darling" and "baby".
Just let me say something honest and true,
I enjoy spending time with you.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Terrie* (66.81.143.190) -- Tuesday, July 12 2005, 04:18 pm Hi Holly, this is beautiful!!!...the best words ever spoken from a heart are, Honest & True..thanx for sharin' your heart w/us. |
| Ben f (82.2.255.18) -- Tuesday, July 12 2005, 07:57 pm you are on a roll girl!you writing is blowing me away,so much truth in what you write,you can really feel it...great talent! |
| John Foster (62.254.51.110) -- Monday, July 18 2005, 09:34 am A lot of people sometimes dwell on the storyline of a poem...This of course is quite acceptable. In this poem the storyline is very good but the rhyme, meter and word usage is excellent. Great visual imagery and metaphors. |
| Jughead (219.74.201.215) -- Sunday, July 24 2005, 02:58 pm Your title caught my eye. It's not returning it back. Haha. sorry sorry. I liked your poem very much. It's simply sweet plus i liked the rhyme real good. Keep them coming babe. |
| Daniell (192.168.1.102) -- Friday, August 26 2005, 06:10 pm You are going to kill me for reading this, but it is very sweet and true. Please don't be mad at me for reading this. |
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