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The Creation
17 July, 2005
Author: Kay_13

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we all came from different mothers
and fathers we all look, act,
feel, see, and many other
things different from each other
but there is one thing that is
the same in all of us and that
one thing is our traits that
come from our parents,
grandparents and so on so
you see we are all just
bits and pieces of our
parents put together as one
to make the perfect child
our parents think we are

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (216.191.83.219) -- Sunday, July 17 2005, 06:20 pm

awe

This is a good writing, It's the way parents should think the perfect child. so nice.
kayla (68.209.157.114) -- Tuesday, August 9 2005, 08:07 pm

THANKS!!

thanks a lot barb for your comment i am happy you enjoyed it
 
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