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Desperate Souls
17 July, 2005
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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Two desperate souls does not mean love.
Two desperate souls settling for less.
Two desperate souls making a big mess.
Two desperate souls looking for truth.
Two desperate souls don't find the truth.
Two desperate souls will accept even a bore,
Two desperate souls no more.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (82.36.135.205) -- Sunday, July 17 2005, 10:28 am

Deep

I feel this one is full of deep meaning, Barb. A very interesting read.
barb (66.46.230.141) -- Tuesday, July 19 2005, 02:21 am

thanks cap

I'm glad you liked my writing and yep I know two people that are so afraid of being alone, that she puts up with his lies and he puts up with her boringness just to say they have someone. Thanks again for enjoying it.
poisonivy60 (68.19.190.140) -- Tuesday, July 19 2005, 03:40 am

Barb

oh I have seen this in people before...They have to respect themselves and know there is more out there than to just settle for what comes their way...great write girl...
barb (66.46.230.141) -- Tuesday, July 19 2005, 04:18 am

oh thank-you

poison I'm so glad you have seen this also. I don't think anyone should accept less than what they want. We can be alone with someone if it's not what we want. Thank-you so much for seeing it too.
 
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