Reality by Crimson Angel

Crying a stream of bloody tears
Dwelling within endless sorrow
Wishing there could be an end
That there would be no tomorrow
Beggers can't be choosers
Is a common moral they say
It holds a truth that maybe we could
Get through just one day
Life wouldn't be easy
It chose to fight us back
It was tough to keep our minds sane
It was reality we chose to lack
As night turns into day
And day turns into night
Ageless times will steal human's fate
And leave darkness, to conquer light

luc (68.74.145.89) -- Tuesday, August 12 2003, 04:04 pm

no title
this one, has a perfect ending. couldnt have put it better myself. Poems are do really sound more "seriouse" when used in a-b-c-b pattern.. good poem...

Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Tuesday, August 12 2003, 08:11 pm

Author's Comment
Thanks, luc, glad you liked it. I was partially trying to make it sound like it was going to have a good ending. But anyway, thanks again, and I'm glad you liked. :-)

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved. No part of this website, including all pictures and written words, may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without permission of the original author of the work. All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner. All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com so the proper person may be notified.