My Mistake
29 May, 2003
Author: Crimson Angel
Darkness surrounds me,
I am crushed by my fear.
I see nothing but sadness around me,
Where I had lost what once was dear.
As I place my hand over my heart,
I hear no beat of joy.
I only hear tears to sorrow,
Love shouldn't be treated like a toy.
My tears form a lake around me,
My lonliness has become my only friend.
My memories wrap around me,
As my life came to its bend.
I still see the sweetness in thy face,
I still feel the softness in thy touch.
It tortures me into shameful tears,
To know I had lost this much.
Angels who once surrounded me,
Are replaced with fallens from Hell.
My halo has been broken,
And I have been locked up in my own shell.
If this ever happens again,
God knows I'd fix my ways.
I'd hold onto thee, and never let go,
Until the end of our days
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| luc (68.74.148.176) -- Thursday, July 3 2003, 08:22 pm it was really good the only thing that really got to me was the usage of old english mixed with modern. personaly i dont like when writers do that unless its quoted. the old english language is a beutiful language only when used "fully". not mixed. but thats just me. and i really did like the poem.. good one. |
| Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Thursday, July 3 2003, 09:21 pm Thanks. lol, I didn't really mean to mix it, bu I have made many with either one or the other, so I s'pose I got confused, but thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like my work. :) |
| Poet Chick (12.249.164.87) -- Sunday, July 6 2003, 04:57 am Gurlie, tha's one tight poem you have there! Good job!! |
| Christina (209.175.72.252) -- Wednesday, January 21 2004, 08:55 pm nice poem crimson Angel |
| Christina (209.175.72.252) -- Wednesday, January 21 2004, 08:56 pm nice poem Crimson Angel |
| Crimson Angel (209.175.72.252) -- Wednesday, January 21 2004, 08:56 pm Lol, thankyew Christina. :P P.S. Glad you were bored enough to look at my poems from school. XDDDDD! |
| Christina (209.175.72.252) -- Wednesday, January 21 2004, 08:57 pm nice poem Crimson Angel |
| heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Thursday, March 11 2004, 12:27 am i hate to say it but thats like so umm me...and every other girl i know,but we all make mistakes..to bad we cant fix this kind:(.great poem! |
| Crimson Angel (67.162.95.179) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 11:00 pm I figured it would relate to some people. I didn't think it would be only me who faced that kind of situation. But yes, it's a shame we can't. And thank you very much for your comment! |
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