Love's Fate by Crimson Angel

If not love, then where is that fear?
Holding you in torment, as you step on the ground.
Looking both ways, seeking protection,
But none are to be found.
You run through your heart,
Looking at all the emptiness.
Yet in a way, it's full,
Crushing your every helplessness.
Your screams are unheard,
Trying to see the good.
But there is no love, in what has been bestowed.
And what love was to be that should.
Twas it wealth to bring you to such a fate?
How would I know?
I have had a true, caring love.
Yet, you made your problems grow.
Since, this is your fate,
I leave you to dwell.
To ponder, of your love,
For whom you "claim" you love so well...

Poet Chick (12.249.164.87) -- Monday, June 30 2003, 06:14 am

Cool
this poem's cool too. i like it. it kinda reminds me of what i went through with love. anyway, da's awesome, and i wanna see more. good job, gurlie.

Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Friday, July 4 2003, 01:25 am

Author's Comment
Thank you on your comment, and I'm glad you enjoy what I write. :)

christine (64.228.11.5) -- Tuesday, September 16 2003, 01:37 am

wow
i was researching poetry about fate for my english lit class, this is 100% gold. pure genius

Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Thursday, September 18 2003, 01:04 am

Author's Comment
Thanks, Christine, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Unfortunately, I've quit poetry, or at least submitting it on here, lol. But, Thanks once again, I'm very pleased you liked it.

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