The One by Danny

I drink to ease the pain
I smoke to set things straight
but through all the daze and clouded haze
you still seem to amaze me

Your beauty can only be compared to a sunset viewed from a mountain peak
and the sound of your voice is the sound of love and makes my body weak

I start to tremble at the thought of your lips
and i start to imagine the taste of your kiss

Will i ever get the girl of my dreams
or will my love keep on moving down this dark stream

I drank to ease the pain
I smoked to set things straight
and as i gaze into the sun
it's you i want, you are the one

Bright Sky (24.72.92.94) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 09:17 am

Really Good Poem!
That is a really really nice poem. I don't know how old this poem is or if you'll get this comment but if you do get this comment than please let me now by quickly replying by making a comment on your poem but just tell me you got this comment. Again this poem is really good and obviously from the heart.....good luck out there......

Madeline (204.234.17.5) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 06:23 am

wow
Wow!! Hey I totally know what youre saying in the poem (except for me its the guy of my dreams) I really admire you for putting yourself out there and letting the world read how you feel and your words are like lightening, hot and pulsing and electrifying. I'd really like to chat sometime, so send me an email if you want to chat too.

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