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Coldness
14 November, 2005
Author: Razors Blood

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I sit in the shower
Feeling so much pain
Coldness washing over me
Slowly going insane

There's a scar for every tear
A cut for every lie
A wish for every dream
A hope that I would die

The coldness washes over me
Hoping to erase
Erase the pain I deal with it
Erase the pain I face

A scream for attention
A cut for relief
A tear drop for heartache
A scream for belief

------- Author's Notes -------

my friend tiff gave me an idea on this poem from her poem, Deadly Love. it kicks *ss!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

jenny (167.1.119.100) -- Monday, February 12 2007, 08:57 pm

0_o

depressed, are we?
eliana (24.44.77.89) -- Thursday, January 14 2010, 02:33 am

a woman

i think this is poem i would read all the time and show to my friend
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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