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Winter
22 November, 2005
Author: Mike

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The cancer spreads inside me
As the cold winds thaw my heart.

I sit staring at the grey sky,
Wondering why it reflects my very being.
Is there a mirror above me that can reach into my soul,
Showing the emotions I try so hard to keep hidden?

A pallet of darkness
Stretching across
Forever,
Sheltering me from the sun's
Harsh kiss.

Clouding the bright horizon
From my tender gaze.

Isolating me ffrom the world,
An island within a sea of people.

Alone.
Empty.
Cold.

Lost until the end of eternity.

------- Author's Notes -------

Just reread it, and the first line doesn't mean I have cancer.. It's a metaphor..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.6.122) -- Tuesday, November 22 2005, 06:16 pm

Mike

This is a great poem,and a sad one. Shows the pain your going through, the emptiness that is burried deep within your being, So many emotions! Awsome write!!!!
Mike (82.35.78.186) -- Wednesday, November 23 2005, 01:47 pm

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Tammy, thank you. :)
 
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