Liquid Visions by Terrie*

my ancestors from long ago
have seen what I can not

They have heard the spirits, sacred souls
Speak within the wind
Up the highest mountain top

And beneath the deepest sea
Under a white mountain Apache moon so open and full

Lookin’ up into the brightest star
I extend my arms
I so wish that one big wish
from my heart for it to be

Oh how I wish I could hear
His voice Speak to me like he did just one more time
Music to my earslike a flute
gently soothin’ my heart

I can not hear
but my heart knows he is very near
Sittin’ upon Gods paradise
Waitin’ for me

That’s when my tears
Bring on the liquid vision,into my heart
When I see him standin’ there
With his arms open for me
holdin’ in his hand my silver weddin’ band
That I placed in his pocket so so long ago

Just like he did before
he waits for me

Princess Moon (71.40.28.18) -- Monday, November 28 2005, 07:14 pm

Another Beauty!
I love this one too, its so romantic! I loved the way you wrote "With his arms open for me/holdin' in his hand my silver weddin' band/That I place in his pocket so so long ago" Beautiful! Couldn't have come up with a better visual line! Love it.

Terrie* (69.19.137.22) -- Tuesday, November 29 2005, 10:16 pm

you bring joy to all hearts with your chosen word
thank you Princess Moon, for your sincere and warm comment. when my time comes and we meet again for the 2nd time i know he will place my ring back on my finger where it belongs as i bring his with me and do the same .

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