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Yours Till Eternity
28 November, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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Only your heart, knew and felt
what was mine, that became and was your's

Only your soul touched and tasted
what i had to give
Only your eyes had seen me inside
the good, the bad and the pain
that i could never hide

Only your arms have held
this body of mine
Only your lips and tongue
have locked and consumed this wine, of mine

Only your life was lived with me
Only yours till eternity

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Princess Moon (71.40.28.18) -- Monday, November 28 2005, 07:12 pm

Beautiful, Terrie!

I loved this poem Terrie, it felt so peaceful, insightful, romantic, and dare I say it, eternal when I read it. Like a happy calm place to just get lose in, your love's love! Keep writing Terrie, you're awesome!
Tammy (66.38.4.244) -- Monday, November 28 2005, 09:45 pm

Beautiful Poem

Terrie* your words are so soothing to ones heart, and touches deeply within their being. Beautiful Words as always!
Terrie* (69.19.137.22) -- Tuesday, November 29 2005, 09:27 pm

catch my glow from love and praise..

thank you ladies, love is soft and tranquil on my heart, Princess moon and Tammy both your comment are far beyond the moon , thank you, ya got me glowin' brighter than the brightest star, your comments are so precious..thank you
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.66) -- Friday, December 2 2005, 01:52 am

The One And Only....

There is for each of us many chances at true love. Yet there is only that ONE that will know us, all of us, everything we are, and were and wish to be. That ONE who knows all we have to give and gives us all we ever need. How long and worth while is the wait for that ONE, that ONLY ONE, ours for eternity. Lovely Terrie and so very much more than that, touchng, inspiring, breath taking. Wonderful Terrie thank you for sharing.
Terrie* (69.19.138.175) -- Saturday, December 3 2005, 07:22 pm

no mistake 'bout it he was the ONE & ONLY..

thank you, your comment is such a beautiful one, i did, i found the love, of the ONE & ONLY ONE, on my very first chance in findin' love so true..thank you ..your comments are like breathing sunshine in.
 
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