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You Reached In So Deep
29 November, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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You asked me why do I cry
I opened my heart and told you why
You told me, you would be there
In every tear to share

You said, I ask for nothin’
Just let me be here next to you
To help you get through

You said everything was goin’ to be okay
You promised to be there when skies were gray
Sang me to sleep upon every blue moon night

You stretched out your arms
Holdin’ me so close each and everyday
and absorbed my loneliness away

I asked now what is it I can do for you
You said just your friendship will do

------- Author's Notes -------

some friendships reach in further

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Comments on this poem/writing:

JF (80.6.51.13) -- Wednesday, November 30 2005, 12:32 pm

Reaching out

Really expressive writing....liked this a lot.
Terrie* (69.19.137.113) -- Wednesday, November 30 2005, 06:32 pm

durin' a storm some take the plunge w/us

thank you John,God and a few true given friends stay right besides us in our time of need...yet there is always just one that dives in for us ..
nicole (208.33.233.156) -- Saturday, June 24 2006, 07:20 pm

wow !!!!

the waz the best poem thtat i have read to myself and its so deep like its ment for friend that forgot you where here in this earh :(
 
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