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I Dare You
7 December, 2005
Author: Taylor James

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im so f**king angry right now
i just want to shoot myself in the head
because all i fell is pain and dread.

i hate the way i am
i hate the way people judge
like i dont already have enough of that.

i cant believe they still think im 5
why does HE still keep me alive?

im sick of the way people treat me
like a piece of sh*t
they scraped off their shoe,

let me tell you
i aint taking it no more
so from now on leave you attitude at the door.

my anger has built up to much
soon im gonna explode in this dump
just stab me in the heart
and soon enough we'll be apart.

if you really hate me as much as you say
why dont you just get it over with
all you have to do
is pull the trigger.

then and only then will i have peace
so go on i dare you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.139) -- Thursday, December 8 2005, 07:28 pm

Double, Triple Dare

Hhahha...Let it out Teej...let it out... Breathe again! Release it. Get relief. I've been angrier this year than I've ever been in my whole life. You know, you reflect back on memories where folks tried everything in their power to make you feel diminished... Well, it's taking effect now... I hate to admit it, but I'd replay the scenes in my mind of me winning a fight physically this time instead of crying like I really did back then....lol
Schweeeet Anger poem!
Mike (82.35.78.186) -- Friday, December 9 2005, 12:12 am

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Love the last line, really brings the poem to a halt right there. Great read, Mike
Taylor James (194.81.223.62) -- Thursday, January 5 2006, 03:35 pm

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hey meri and mike, thanks for the comments.glad u "love" the last line lol and yea its bout when people try to over power you and your not letting them and you are sick of them and you just overload on all thses feelings and finally explode
 
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