Beyond A Words Surface by The Lost Girl

“It’s captivating,… It’s moving”- that’s what they always say.
“That a sixteen year old girl, can write a poem this way.
She displays amazing maturity with every move of the pen,”
But can they not tell- I’m trying to let them in.
I’m trying to signify the pain I keep inside,
I’m secretly pleading for help, but yes, they all are blind.
They only see words connecting to make a sentence,
But the depth of the words are leering with a vengeance.
I’m writing to express myself, to release repulsive demons,
Not to amuse your mind- no, that’s not the reason.
I wish they weren’t so shallow, they barely scratch the surface,
But that they would read my poems with cultivation, acknowledge my writing purpose.

anonymous (4.226.120.234) -- Sunday, December 11 2005, 03:47 am

I'm reading your words...
with an open mind, scratching beyond their surface. I just wanted to let you know- I hear you

Mike (82.35.78.186) -- Monday, December 12 2005, 07:55 pm

..
Lost, you know I hear you. Read through your poems about a week ago, saw my comments. In quite a few of them, I told you I'm always here if you ever needed to talk. That offer still stands. I know you've gone through pain, and you still are even now. I'm always here to lend an ear, if you so wish. Love, Mike :heart:

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