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The Devil Within
17 September, 2003
Author: DarkFeather

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It has been sleeping
Within my soul for a thousand years
Leading me into darkness
Dancing in my mistakes

Laughing at me
Tempting me
Deceiving me
Hurting me

It kills me slowly
This unnamed feeling
It comes over me
With the fury of hell

It tries to put me in bad situations
But when it gets caught
It leaves me faceless
I HATE YOU

Why can't you leave me alone
I hate you
Leave me alone
Please help

Please help me
I want to cry
I want to leave
I want to let it all go

Won't you please help me
I need somebody to hold on to
I die a little more each day
Waiting for it all to end...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (63.65.187.71) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 06:43 am

Anger

Anger is indeed the thief of love. If only It could be put away in some chest in the corner to never be heard from again. Instead of frieghtening all good away. Great writing, very descriptive.
Martin Vann (171.75.221.92) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 02:48 pm

Your words described like a mirror, good work.

Dark Feather,

This is quite good, I enjoyed the insight of your mortal soul and understand it. I to, have that picture of myself at times, wrote a poem called "The Demnon" check it out, you will know what I mean.

Sincere poem, thanks
MartinV
XoForeverXo (24.75.7.216) -- Wednesday, November 17 2004, 12:40 am

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"Please help me, I want to cry, I want to leave
I want to let it all go, Won't you please help me
I need somebody to hold on to, I die a little more each day, Waiting for it all to end..."-AbSOLUTELY AMAZING! i wish i wasnt so angry all the time...but it happens...
 
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