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I Want You
8 January, 2006
Author: Scorpio

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I want you
You make me forget who I am
You give and know what I need
You send shivers down my spine
You make me feel like a true woman
You accept me for who I am
You understand every ache I hold
You're better than any drug
I know I can't own you
And I don't want to
It may just be a phase
And I know you don't want me to but
I want you

------- Author's Notes -------

I've never really known what it felt like to really want to -own- someone, like just to 'have' them. It started out as a sinful lust and somehow it grew into something. Not love, it can't be yet, but something with potential. He only wants fun, it's what he does, he's not into deeper things. But I still want him. I still -crave- him.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sexi byoth (65.115.252.70) -- Wednesday, October 25 2006, 10:40 pm

wow

that was nice
jocey (66.87.65.17) -- Wednesday, November 19 2014, 09:51 am

wow

The poem: spot on. But the author's notes described exactly how I feel about the man I first slept with. I don't love him but even though we've stopped with each other, I crave him. I don't want to go back but every day this craving grows more and more. I hate asking him to be with me for one night. Sigh.
 
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