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Broken Friendship
15 January, 2006
Author: Seizure

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It was over eight years I'd say about nine
When we saw a failed life, oh yeah, it was mine
My best friend in the world ended his life with his grief
And I was all alone, now my time seemed so brief
Then this girl that I liked flipped her car, lost her life
Then my grandpa passed away, I cut myself with a knife
Life finally held me down, f*cking me to the ground
Then it kicked in my face so I couldn't make a sound
And then a while after when my soul returned with laughter
I made a few more friends, most of them left right after
But there were a couple that remained through the sh*t
And they helped bring me up so I never slit my wrists
So props to Jake and Cory man it's not a bullsh*t story
It's my real life, in all it's grime and glory
So I picked my life up in a world that never cares
I'd given up my life if I knew it'd better theirs

I thought we were down, but last month, out the blue
Cory shot at me a resounding, "f*ck you!"
I got him a job to work and I gave him a place to live
And I spotted him on rent when it was more than I could give
And then I found out, he spread sh*t around
Like a six year old girl loving to hear her own sound
He called me a liar when he lied to his wife
And he lied to his job about his dad dying and strife
I got something called honor and it prevents a single lie
I hope Cory learns all that before he finally dies
He dissed my engagement and he stretched all I said
I'm not gonna lie, man I wanted to paint him red
All the pain you gave to me and all the hate you made me see
Makes me realize that you're always gonna lie on me
Now this little girl needs to keep her mouth shut
It's not my fault you're a liar, thief and sl*t

------- Author's Notes -------

We were best friends for eight plus years.

The last word in the poem might sound like a petty low blow, but it's not. It is an observation when he cheated on his wife. Sorry for all the profanity, I was charged.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pooh bear (168.10.57.11) -- Monday, November 20 2006, 03:58 pm

Very touching!

That was a great poem about friendship it made it more clear to me about having a friend.
kiki (66.65.93.118) -- Monday, December 25 2006, 02:40 am

wow

this was a reallygood poem and it happens alot
teadybear (69.109.42.163) -- Monday, March 17 2008, 08:36 pm

sadness

it almost made me cry
Haley (99.163.172.194) -- Friday, March 28 2008, 11:19 pm

Hey

Hey This is Really good poem!
 
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