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I Pray, She Will Remember Me
23 January, 2006
Author: ShyHeart

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Just a kid, brave and in love, I put the oars in my little boat, push off from shore
I row across the lake, going to see my heart, again tonight, then the storm broke
Just one more pull on the oars and I'll reach her shore, she is waiting for me
I'm to weak, as I drift down, I see the stars and the moon-light in her eyes

I Pray, She Will Remember Me

I Pray, She Will Remember Me

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MC (152.163.100.5) -- Wednesday, January 25 2006, 02:16 am

Martin, My Darling.....

Is your heart so shy that you would run from the woman who loves you? Your heart is safe in the shelter of my love for you. Your prayer is answered.....I will not forget, nor will I let go. Don't give up on us....
Princess Moon (71.40.28.18) -- Wednesday, January 25 2006, 02:53 pm

Beautiful

Shyheart, this was perhaps one of the most romantic and awestriken poems I've ever heard. Its beautiful, its lovely, its every bit as special as the love itself. Love it! Keep writing, you're very good!
 
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