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Together At Last
18 March, 2004
Author: Del

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You unlocked the motel door
And we slowly entered the motel room.
I never thought we'd get this chance,
At least not quite this soon.

The love we felt for each other,
Was bursting at the seams.
All these months our precious love,
Was only released in dreams.

I sat on the bed, you pulled the drapes,
Then sat very close to me.
You caressed my face so lovingly.
My whole body filled with ecstacy.

It didn't take us very long,
To shed our summer clothing.
You placed your heated body over mine,
I could feel your maleness growing.

Your kisses hot and heavy now,
My body trembling with desire.
We were both so very nervous,
Our hearts were now on fire.

The release you had, you didn't expect.
It was just a little too fast.
'Oh, my darling, I'm so sorry,' you said,
'I really wanted it to last.'

You kept apologizing while holding onto me.
I laughed and said, 'Hey, it's quite alright.
Just let me take over, my dear.
We've got the rest of the night

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 12:45 am

Del...

This poem is amazing! I loved it so much!You are such a great writer, i hope you continue to write and submitt your poetry on dreamers. Thanks so much!

Leah Kendall
Clive Ringshall (63.184.0.1, 209) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 04:02 pm

Very Nice

I like your work, and enjoy reading it,
A friend tell me that we write alike,
Umm still like your work
 
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