Penknife And Paper by Emma-Louise

One quick, swift movement changed who I was,
Perhaps it was fate that wanted me to feel these extremes.
Despite everything, I will never forgive because
What I am left with has never existed in my dreams.
You will always be the cause of this imperfection,
You will forever be the reason for this particular ruin.
One day a silent tear will escape me, the innocent victim,
In the mirror it will become the first thing I’ll see.
I will stop and stare with hatred at the outcome,
The mark, the imprint, the engravement of the scar you gave me.

Mike (82.45.211.145) -- Friday, March 24 2006, 11:55 am

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Love the title for this. I sort of understand the poem, but only after reading it a couple of times. O=) Well, I think I do.. Care to explain? Email me

Emma (86.1.48.222) -- Monday, March 27 2006, 07:41 pm

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When I got that stone through at me and the cut glued, I knew it'd scar and I got so angry. ..it's scary y'know? So after it's all healed I will never look the same again, ..it's just the most strangest and frustrating thing ever. he has left his mark on my face and I can't do anything about it. Get me?

Mike (82.45.211.145) -- Monday, March 27 2006, 08:02 pm

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Wow, I get it now. And omg, it's so amazingly put once you understand it. I love this so much, Emma. But his mark will only affect you if you let it. You're still hot ^^ so don't let one fool ruin what you know you have.

MC (205.188.117.65) -- Tuesday, March 28 2006, 12:03 am

I don't know how recently
you have been scarred, but neo-sporin works wonders on cuts. It's icky sticky, but it will help. Sorry that happened to you. You're still beautiful, just as you are, and you wrote a very eloquent poem about the experience.

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