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Ahhh...
23 March, 2006
Author: Jeremy Morzos

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(Co-written with Meridian Zuriel)


JM:

To my poetess Goddess
Meri where art thou?
I am calling out to thee
A soft gentle voice like a whisper in your ear
And a passionate sigh on the back of your neck
Kissing and nibbling caressing your body
Kissing your luscious but cold and sweet voleptious lips
Putting my fingers combine-
Combine my fingers into yours
Taking your small hands like a golden eye to sing a song of Heaven
I'm going to go ahead and say it although I hardly know you
Do I really know you at all?
After all I can't help myself
Being the man I am I'm trying to do the best I can
I'm a leo I heard that they seem to fall in love way to fast
That is so like me
I want to say I love you
Although I don't know how you'll take it in
Breathe and sigh again
I hope I'm not scaring you off
Why does love always seem to run away?
Please girl I'll give you wings so you can fly
Won't you promise me you won't leave me?
All the tears that I'm used to that I silently cry at the moment
All the tears that you've cried I feel sorry for you
Now that you have my attention
I got you
Just like Jerry Maguire
You complete me....
Would you be willing to say it;
And be my Renee Zelleweger
Did I have you at hello?
I want to know
Give me a sign
Sometimes love can be blind
3:00 pm that is the time
Rewind fast forward playback
One last line
Go ahead it's your turn give me a rhyme
Pause gasp of air
You......

MZ:

JM, you got me feeling all like a Juliet
I feel I've known you for years, although we never met
I feel I could do a move like Michelle Kwan
Doing triple toe loops until the break of dawn
Like an astronaut, I can walk on the moon
This is the best I've felt all afternoon
You ask where I am, I never left your side
Just think of me, with each high rolling tide

Leo, follow my lead, stay close behind
Turn the key and unbolt your beautiful mind
Open your eyes and see me appear
Tune in and hearken unto this voice so clear
I know a place, I'll take you there
But it won't be a secret if I tell you where
No frontin', your lyrics blew me away
Like 145 mph wind gusts on a chilly day

It was like pressing pause, I was so shocked
I could only correspond through sign language, since my jaw was on lock
You see, for an instant, I turned into a pillar of salt
Your enthralling words brought Meridian to a halt
Your poetry was like slurping up sweet, juicy nectar
I couldn't respire because my heart was with yours, heart collector
You're my Jimmy Joe, I'm your Callie Ann
For those that don't know, the J.M. really stands for Journey Man
He becomes Poe, once the pen touches his hand
He'll take you on a cruise, into that unknown land

JM:

Thank you for loving me
Thank you for loving me
So what I get from this I already held the key
Oh now I know I need some honey
Oh now I know I need some honey
Oh now I know I need some honey
'cause you're my pretty busy bee
And how this pretty busy bee be pretty busy
It's mystical silence I'm so glad you understand
sometimes another name I write under
and how I often wonder
If only in your heart it was thunder?
Don't close your eyes baby
I'm so glad that you understand
The pen it is in my hand
Mightier than the sword
louder than a guitar chord
Like my words come strait down from the Lord
That's how you got me feelin'
You're like a beautiful angel
You're like a beautiful angel
You're like a beautiful angel
You're like a beautiful angel
You're like a beautiful angel
The most beautiful one I've found
The most beautiful one around
The most beautiful one out of all of them
you've got me sittin' here thinkin' of you
All I know is I don't know what to do
It's like from inside of my heart it's calling to you
Is this love meant to be
Is it really true?
I can only imagine
(1980)
He got shot down
His light was no longer left on
John Lennon died
All the tears that the people cried
Imagine all the people livin' life in peace
Woe woe woe
It's almost time to go............
Only nine minutes left to write
I'm not saying that you're not right
'Cause you're just like me
I think about it and I could only be laughing or crying
It isn't for the world to know who I am
I'm a famous nobody
I'm listening to the song somebody by Bonnie McKee
I've only dreamt of wishing on a star
For a beautiful angel like you are....


Believe in yourself
I think you're a star like me
I just wanna be locked up in your arms
Promise me you'll never let me go
and just hold my hand in yours
It's like I can hear your whispers of passion
A sigh of ecstasy
That I'm already feelin' for some strange reason
And I can hear your sweet aspirated orgasmic voice
Lullaby horizon
Again....
Yeah, passion
You wake up in your make-up
You wake up your mind
If only to make out sometime
Weeping willow
It's like I can be Henry Miller and you'll be Anais Nin
Please your face don't hide

MZ:

I can see your face, I can hear you speak
And I listen intently to a soul so meek
Just watching your body language is entertaining
I observe what's before me, I marvel at this human painting
I watch your hand movement when explaining
And believe me; all this watching took some training
I watch like a panther before he pounces on his prey
I watch your tongue shape the words you say
JM, you got me smiling and staring into nothingness
Like McDonalds, I find myself lovin' it nonetheless

When I'm under this influence, I feel the power
And it lasts longer than Big Red, it lasts longer than 24 hours
I can't seem to wake up from this slumber you got me into
Like a Sleeping Beauty, I'm out cold because of you
I feel I'm on Mt. Everest; I could drown in my thoughts
To refrain from acting peculiar, you don't know how hard I fought
I went to take a bathe, but there wasn't a pool
Someone had to tell me, I didn't even feel my own drool
I'm so sprung, I can't even walk a straight line
I took one look at the atmosphere, and I felt so divine

JM:

Yea` we can do dat it would be iight!
Totally kewlio yupperz uh huh yo you go it down 'jes right
send da light why am I talking like I'm black when I know I'm white
okay I'll change back to being me
Snap into a slim jim is this really reality?
I just want to flow all of a sudden I don't know why that is
Oh here it is dis is this and dis is dat
Tell me more about you I'm interested
You got me in check than again I'm gettin' paid
Like somethin' you said
It makes me feel like as if were married
It's like Imagine I could play a role of Jesus for a day
And you were my wife Mary
Just like the song voices carry
Somethin' is so scary
Change around again
'Cause you're my Meri and we are eating drinking and dancing merry
In the Meridian
Can you come out and play
And I'm waiting for you to say:

MZ:

JM, more about me? What is there to know?
I'm confidential, sort of like top secret bro
And don't hold back on the pen, let them rhymes flow
So, you're a music freak too? I bet you can blow.
When I try to sing, every mirror in the house breaks
Whoever told me I could sing, made a huge mistake
I'm so much of a Taco Bell fanatic that I could reside there
Eat all that fried food and act like I don't care
Down my sprite and wave my mild sauce in the air
Lick my fingers until I receive all kinds of glares

I'll come out and play, but where you wanna go?
Do you wanna tour Seattle or fly to Reno?
It's your call my good man, because you're the boss
I can't look at you too long, my thoughts will be lost
We could ride by bike or moped to the park
Arrive in the evening and stay until it's after dark
Sit on the swings and talk until our lips get dry
Race each other by foot and see if it'll be a tie
But you'll probably be the winner, since you're a man
I'll probably end up being the one retreating in the sand

We could hit Krispy Kreme, and order ourselves donuts
Or buy the New Yorker pizza from Pizza Hut
Or ride over to the drive thru of Dairy Queen
Slurp our caramel molatte's until we've slurped them clean
I hear you like nature; well I'm a nature extremist too
I like when the moon turns orange, how about you?
I imagine the sparkling stars are like monkey bars
I can see myself swinging from one to the other from afar
I'll let you visit Venus, if you'll let me explore Mars
I can only wonder if it's composed of buildings and cars
Suddenly Journey Man, I'm dreaming like Peter Pan
I just can't seem to slow my pace, now that I've ran

JM:

Well you've gotta slow down the light is yellow
I hope I can catch up
You're driving so fast like a speeding bullet
Here I am the Journey man
Simply trying to do my best
It's all that I can
You know it's all I can do
Yeah I think I'm gonna let ya win the race
I don't mind if I fall in second place
I still have my trophy a picture of your face that came to me in a dream
And as I stare into your crystallized emerald green catoliphic eyes
That change into amber rose majestic blue
Than you'll scream and I'll know exactly what you mean
It's alright
The colors fade away that explode in the sun
Change day into night
Black and white
This is the movie scene
You're my ghetto queen
You're my all and all my everything
You're my baby doll boo
And the reason why I sing is because Magical Zephyr I love you....
You could be like my Janet and I'll be your Justin
Cry me a river baby I'll be there to watch you fly for me
Ghost whispers in my mind sometime
Everything's fine
I changed my mind
On your side and this is mine
My heart still bleeds for you....
Silver tears for you my angel dear
Have no fear I'll be here
No more loving in vain
No more hurt or sorrow
No more pain
I'm Imagining I'm calling you on the phone
Hello is anybody home???
Over and out

MZ:

JM, lead foot is my nick name
My tires burn so much rubber, they burst into flame
I'm too much of a speed demon for you to stay on my tail
I zip past you, leaving nothing but dust in my trail
Boy, didn't you know I drive like a bat out of hell?
I thought you knew me, but I guess you don't know me well
There's nothing slow or sluggish about MZ
If I'm known for anything, I'm known best for my agility

You say your heart bleeds, and you cry silver tears
You say you fantasize, and you assure me that you're here
As I read, your mind's eye has no boundaries
I'm taken aback, that's how beautiful you sound to me
I feel like a kid seeing Disney World for the first time
You anesthetize me; I'm so caught up in your rhymes
I'm like a fly held captive in a spider's net
I try to writhe free, but this is as tangled as I'm gonna get

You spin another string of silk, an attempt to not let me leave
I give up the fight, and surrender to the web that you weave
I hear you say you want me to be your ghetto queen
Ok Sir Justin, just as soon as I finish these magic beans
They help you get taller in height, and that's my ambition
I wanna meet your eye level, so you won't have to bend down to listen
So I guess it's because of love that I'm in this condition
JM, I got it so bad that I'm-a need to contact a clinician
Without your spark, there would be no flare
I'm not on the ground, yet I'm not in the air
My feet are moving, yet I'm going nowhere
My head is detached from my body all due to Mr. Debonair

JM:

Hey it's me Mr. Debonair
Thanks Magical Zephyr you got it right there
Do I make myself perfectly clear?
Now all I can say is that I wish you were here
And that's the key to look me in the eye like I'd do
And you better believe me I'd also listen to you
If I had to I wouldn't mindlifting you up hugging you in my arms
And kissing you all over your body and than some more
Making you lose control and show me what you really know
Go with the flow and to answer your question
I didn't get to earlier I'd like to do both
How cool it would be to tour Seattle
Being the rockstar I am in my heart and mind
As long as I got you my Courtney
I've actually been told I've sound like Kurt Cobain
Than we can fly to Reno go to the casino
So I can play the slot machines than what would you say
About getting married in Las Vegas by a Elvis impersonator?
It doesn't matter to me I just want to hear you meow like a cat so bad
I know it sounds corny but I'm getting horny
And I want to make you hopefully feel the same
With my tongue across the libia you're so pretty I'm ready to eat ya
I'm turning this into a fantasy to see if you can keep up with me
Now that I'm getting past (Beep) remember this is only a test
'Cause right now I'm driving you I want you to show me
What I'm making you feel too by what I'm giving you
I want you to show me that you can last
Come on baby don't be afraid to let loose and give it back to me
This is what I want to see although I can't tell you what to choose to write
Enlighten me darlin' give to me that bright inspiration of yours
Love it is music it is music love us two hearts beat together
If you got it go ahead talk dirty to me and like Lamb Chops
This is the story that never ends I really wish it could go on forever
It's time for me to stop the pen of poe I drop
This is the grand Princess MZ are you ready to rock?
Hey baby there you go that's your que
I know you'll make it beautiful since the Journey Man is comin' atcha'
You take it from here 'cause I'm through
Peace!

MZ:

Lookin’ all chic, born to be a superstar
Walk that line like Johnny, pluck that guitar
Mr. Debonair, what a graphic person you are
Demonstrative but at the same time, bizarre
And that’s a good thing, don’t get me wrong
Pick up the marbles JM, let’s play along
The story doesn’t have to end, you just chose to end it
I had fun ever since the day I was befriended

You amaze me more and more each time
It's like I can hear the tone in your rhymes
I had to check my shoulder; I thought I felt your hand
I had to rub my eyes, for I thought I saw my Journey Man
There's no limit to your world of make believe
But are you really about the truth or are you just out to deceive?
Don’t mind me, you know how I like to kid around
So what shall I do your grace, shine your shoes or your crown?

Some say I do, and I might have a gift for gab
However my poet, vulgarity is not in my vocab
Your thoughts are similar to the river in that they run wild
Let’s not jump the gun just yet oh soul so mild
The horse comes before the cart, not the other way around
Now smile my valiant knight who reigns on the battleground
With armor so bright, it’s like watching a supernova
All it takes is one sweep of your power, and the show is over

I can visualize you with a rose between your teeth
Donning Neiman Marcus attire and sandals on your feet
Singing a few ballads, and getting down
Journey Man you’re so suave, you already got me spellbound
With a build and body type looking similar to Superman's
JM will take you on a trip and let you tour Neverland
He'll show you things beyond your attention span
While leanin’ to the left side in his pimped out Sedan




....ahhh, what a feeling....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Jeremy Morzos (168.12.253.66) -- Friday, March 24 2006, 06:23 pm

Meridian

Congratulations to Meridian on doing a really good job on this I really enjoyed writing with you you've brought me so much joy,happiness & inspiration and I'd like to say if it wasn't for you I wouldn't have been able to come up with what I came up with so Thank you!
Terrie* (66.81.139.186) -- Tuesday, March 28 2006, 09:45 pm

i know this feelin' very well...

Meri and Jeremy, i loved this, i felt it to the core, your young outstandin' souls captured thoughts so well...i am known as the "Native-Rose of Love" to a few of my friends and they know how highly maitenanced to fine poetry my heart is in tuned to, and this my kids was the grand of all...thank you for sharin' such loveliness
 
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