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Wishing
9 April, 2006
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Happy go lucky she followed the path,
Skipping and singing to oh but a tune,
Trees swaying and bowing as she passed,
Bushes lined to guide her way,
Droplets of light shone through the trees so tall,
Polished dew inviting on the ground,
Grass it seems to grow green all around,
Butterflies flew in her special light,
Ladybirds followed in delight,
Fawns danced with rabbits to the girl’s funky beat,
Soon a menagerie of all guided her path

Dancing in harmony were birds in flight,
Doves coo away as she whistled their tune,
With eyes so bright the unicorn came,
She found her wish not upon a star,
She found her wish on a path in daylight,
She held her dream kissing him right,
She opens her eyes with wish in hand,
She smiled and smiled as she said to him goodnight.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Catyrose (128.123.221.86) -- Sunday, April 9 2006, 05:47 am

Such an Inviting Land

you have created. Magical, captivating. I love it. Can I visit sometime? :)
Terrie* (66.81.139.193) -- Sunday, April 9 2006, 06:48 am

these are the sounds of the echo within my heart

Clive, you've mastered the thoughts of a female whom is so much in LOVE, the are some of the mocte quietest thoughts of the very sounds and sights within Loves Heart awwww, you've been peekin' inside our souls presious thoughts, loved this, one among the many best you've penned thanks for dippin' inside a womans heart..
Clive (70.58.229.46) -- Sunday, April 9 2006, 02:55 pm

Art

Kathy and Terrie, Thank you both for your words of magic. (K) Yes you can visit (T) if I managed a peek I'm grateful you noticed
Tammy (66.38.6.235) -- Sunday, April 9 2006, 10:52 pm

Clive

I truly enjoyed reading this lovely enchanting poem...
Clive (70.58.229.46) -- Sunday, April 9 2006, 11:19 pm

TY

Tammy thank you for stopping by, and leaving your thoughts.
 
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