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Remembrance Of A Victim
26 April, 2006
Author: Seizure

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I'm driving to work like any other day
A few hours early but it'll all be okay
I finished my report that my boss needs tomorrow
And my wife is pregnant so there's no time for sorrow!
I drive through the garage like I always do
About the third floor, I still smell the dew
I'm now at the elevator punching in the keys
Seventy third floor, man today should be a breeze

I'm checking email, a day like any other
I got a couple jokes and a note from my mother
She said she's proud of me, I could never let her down
But it's time to get to work, no time to screw around!
Typin' and spacin' changing words that I'm tracin'
I never had a problem pickin' words I'm erasin'
Then my wife called and asked about dinner
"How about a steak?" I said "you picked a winner"

Can this day get any better? I'm at the top of my game!
I never did a thing in life to make me feel shame
I'm walking to the window to take a brief peek
What I saw surprised me to the point I couldn't speak
A plane was flying too low and it's going toward my window
And I try to run away but my muscles are just too slow
As I heard the crash, I knew I'd lived my life
The last thought in my head was "God protect my wife"

------- Author's Notes -------

9-11 - Rest in Peace.
I know my wording is lacking, but I tried my best.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (67.160.237.11) -- Thursday, April 27 2006, 11:21 pm

beautiful

i had no idea it was about 9/11 untill the forth to last line. great job josh!
anonymous (207.200.116.195) -- Sunday, April 30 2006, 09:24 am

Nice

Nice one bro! This could of been my brother-in-law. Lucky for him, he didn't go there then, and also takes flight 93 back. Makes you think. Never know when it's your time? Thanks.
 
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