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Poetry In Motion
28 January, 2004
Author: Del

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P erhaps, my dear, we can go swinging on a star,
O ver lakes and streams while you strum your guitar.
E ven the angels won't mind that at all.
T hey'll watch over us to make sure we won't fall
R oller coaster rides are also quite thrilling.
Y ou tell me, my dear, if you are willing.

I f you are, we'll find a carnival near by
N othing can stop us as we ride way up high.

M aybe tomorrow night we'll take a long walk.
O n Lover's Lane where we can kiss and talk.
T hen for something a little more sound,
I suggest a ride on a merry-go-round.
O h! I guess, you and I with such loving devotion
N ow just expressed our love with Poetry In Motion.

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Princess Moon (168.53.173.137) -- Thursday, January 29 2004, 08:48 pm

Lovely!

This poem was absolutely fantastic and free as it started. It seems like your words have been sort of put together by the quaint words of both a children's story and a love story. I loved it because of its sort of innoncence! Absolutely wonderful! And that last line really kicked butt!
 
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