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The Storm Comforts Me
5 June, 2006
Author: Megan

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the rain falls down
accompanying the tears
that roll down my cheeks
lost in thoughts
that i don't fully comprehend
and i inordinately can't handle

the thunder cries out
like the sorrow inside of me
that i'm trying to subdue
but the roaring thunder
dances with the deafening roaring of my emotions

lightning flashes in infuriated bolts
in the manor that my heart flashes it's anger
one quick bolt; one quick thought
it's provoked and then it fades out
the storm subsequently ends
and i'm left feeling okay

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (75.16.240.115) -- Saturday, June 10 2006, 01:56 am

I like....

this comparison poem... I like the similarities of the nature and your feelings. Puting the intensity to them anyone can understand... Good work
capricorn (82.36.128.180) -- Saturday, June 10 2006, 05:26 pm

nice read

I like the comparisons you make between your emotions and the storm ... it makes a very effective write.
 
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