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I Feel My Heart Crying
25 December, 2003
Author: Del

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I can feel my heart crying,
Every night and day.
My heart wants you near me,
Not so far away.

It flutters like a butterfly,
Wheneven I think of you.
Then I feel the teardrops,
Like tiny drops of dew.

Please stop crying, my dear heart.
There's nothing we can do.
We have to pretend everything's fine,
And try to see this thru.

Maybe someday an angel,
From heaven up above,
Will tap us on the shoulder,
And sanctify our love.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

NICHOLE (151.197.44.172) -- Saturday, December 27 2003, 06:57 am

THAT WAS SO BEATIFUL

I THINK THAT POEM WAS SO BEATIFUL I FEEL THE SAME WAY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!
Clive (63.184.1.214, 2) -- Saturday, December 27 2003, 06:16 pm

Very Nice

This was a pleasent read,
Thank you very much for touching my heart
Silkened Moon (206.216.222.163) -- Saturday, December 27 2003, 08:17 pm

Beautiful, Absolutely Beautiful!

I loved it all the way Del, your just so perfect when it comes to the love poems you write, I mean, its so romantic and heart-felt! I love it! I love it! I love it! Its all you and I'm guessing I more than agree with Clive and Nichole. Awesome work Del, keep writing, I'll keep reading!
LinzAy (205.188.209.76) -- Sunday, December 28 2003, 08:35 am

Ditto

I agree with all of the above! Great writing :)
Ash (63.53.133.93) -- Friday, January 2 2004, 06:11 pm

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Beautiful poem
 
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