Rotten Mind
30 July, 2006
Author: Barbie
rotten mind:
A mind trapped yet unknown, ones body without a soul,
Lost and confused, your unfaithful also abused,
In a corner you sit and wait hearing your cries, hiding behind the lies,
You dont know how to make it stop or relieve the pain,
in your cold and lonely corner you stay,
Waiting for something or somebody, to take you home so no longer your lonely,
But yet it was your choice to hurt the person you loved,
taking advantage of everything above,
So now you sit and think forever, with a mind so forgotten yet so clever,
Your mind and emotions trapped with no where to go,
you thought you had her you think so,
But you didnt you kept her behind closed doors,
but she got away and now you sit and try to find a source.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| sami (68.32.137.173) -- Sunday, August 6 2006, 03:06 am omg iam speachless this is such a good poem!!!! i love it!!! |
| jackie (68.32.137.173) -- Sunday, August 6 2006, 03:06 am this poems sad and real deep to damn gurl this is good! |
| kyle (68.32.137.173) -- Sunday, August 6 2006, 03:07 am i like ur poem!!!! its real good! |
| bobby smith (68.32.137.173) -- Sunday, August 6 2006, 03:08 am i love ur poem its really deep and it make me think about alot of things ive experienced! |
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