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Finished With You
9 August, 2006
Author: Leah06

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You deceived me
Cheated me
Left me here to cry
You had my heart
And broke it
Never told me why.
You caused me pain
And many tears
For months I would just dwell
But I'm done, fed up
And finished
You can go to hell.
Get out of my heart
Stay out of my head
I don't want you there anymore
I'm not your toy
This isn't a game
It's time I slam the door.
With you there is no future
I'm done dreaming of you
I won't think of you each day
For in the end
No matter how great you were
It was me who had to pay.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Bipedalguy (4.156.51.73) -- Thursday, August 10 2006, 11:50 am

Probably a good move.

I read this great poem, and some of your others. My guess is that you are about 16, and at that young age there are more males than females. You won't have any trouble finding another.
I like your writing. Keep it coming.
Leah06 (67.160.237.11) -- Friday, August 11 2006, 09:19 am

Bipedalguy....

Nope, im not 16, and this was more of a getting over type thing. The story behind it is i fell for a marine and he ended up leaving and when i ended up telling him how i felt he had a gf and it got bad between us. And finally one year later i was sick of holding on to something that wasnt there, so i wrote this to help me let go. But im glad you like my style. And i will try to keep writing...
 
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