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Blues Lament
8 October, 2006
Author: Miztrebor

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Notes from a guitar sing
Through the valleys of these
Hills ringing with sadness

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Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 03:24 pm

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Sad but sweet. Hills should be up in the second line though, it would make more sense.
Miz Trebor (137.36.208.85) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 05:59 pm

Haiku

it's a haiku so that would make it wrong.
Miz Trebor (64.246.154.146) -- Saturday, May 26 2007, 03:45 pm

ok my mistake

this isn't really in any haiku form. from further looking at it, i see that all the lines have 6 syllables. So that's just all wrong
 
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