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Afterbirth
8 October, 2006
Author: Miztrebor

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Concrete raining, children
In pain, watch eyes glued
To the television screen.

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Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 03:21 pm

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This one confuses me too! God why do you have to make me feel like such a blond lol! It should be 'glued' instead of 'glues' though.
Miz Trebor (72.230.74.182) -- Thursday, March 12 2009, 09:45 pm

yes it should be

To fix anyone's "blondness" my teacher asked us to write, i think it was five, haiku poems. he also told us one had to be related to the 9/11 events. This is that haiku. i chose to take the view of the child watching the tv. it was easy to picture since on that dark day i was in a classroom watching unblinkingly on the tv screen.
 
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