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Go Now Into The Warm Sun
7 November, 2006
Author: Miztrebor

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Go now into the warm sun
Embrace the sounds of spring
As fresh life has just begun

Sweet smells fill the air my son
And engulf your senses in a fiery ring
Now that you’ve taken in the warm sun

Do take time to enjoy this fun
Not always ill spring, be here to, ring
So take mind of the fresh life that’s begun

Summer will come to commit treason
To overcome the happiness the spring brings
Go now and enjoy the warm sun

Don’t forget the winter ton
Snow for miles, seeing white is the only thing
This is also a fresh life that’s begun

Do not worry the seasons can be one
Winter can be summer, fall can be spring
Go now into the warm sun
As fresh life has just begun

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Cassandra (74.71.2.157) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 02:59 pm

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I dont like this one as much. If it didnt have your name on it I wouldn't have beleived you wrote it, it doesn't seem like your style.
Miz Trebor (137.36.208.85) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 05:53 pm

Not style at all

It isn't really my style at all, i wrote it for my poetry class. we needed to write a villanielle or sumthing. so i posted it, i post everything i write no matter how good or bad
 
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