My Heart Whispers by Rick Ryckman

When the night is gentle and I turn to my soul.
In my thoughts she cascades from my dream.
Standing in awe before her throne.
I will kneel to gently kiss her shrine of power.
She unfurls her wondrous treasure of innocence.
Caressing her delicate wings.
Her rhythm is gliding effortlessly.
I can hear her rapturous murmurs.
The whispers of her fragrance lingers.
A rainbow appears like magic before my eyes.
Its brilliant colors are falling covering the night.

barb (67.58.200.243) -- Tuesday, November 21 2006, 12:26 am

good writing
I read all your entries for today and it is good writing but it sounds like you are in a mod of satisfying lol If you know what I mean.

Rick Ryckman (71.97.20.55) -- Tuesday, November 21 2006, 01:28 am

Barb
Hi Barb,
Appreciate your kind feedback. I was beginning to wonder if anyone was reading what I have written. As I have not seen any comments. Will take the bad with the good. I am glad so far that it has been all good. [ SMILE ] Let me see if I can break down what you are saying. Did you mean Mood of satisfying. If that is the case! There is one thing I have learned in my lifetime. Always remember the woman should be satisfy first! If a man learns to do this. A woman will give him anything he needs. For a woman sits on the throne of power.

BARB (67.58.200.243) -- Tuesday, November 21 2006, 02:16 am

ha ha
yep I meant mood forgot an o.lol. and yea I read don't comment all the time but I was in one of those mods, I mean moods. lol keep writing.

barb (67.58.204.70) -- Tuesday, November 21 2006, 10:34 pm

oh yea
I didn't mean satifying . It was a polite way of saying you sound horney. with those writings lol

barb (67.58.204.70) -- Tuesday, November 21 2006, 10:50 pm

good writing
You know you have talent with words,but most of your wriyings are of a sexual nature. Use your talent of words for something else. then you might get more comments. Most women shy away from writing like this . Just some unwanted advice lol

Bipedalguy (4.156.51.181) -- Tuesday, November 21 2006, 10:57 pm

Deep
Deep subject. Your writing is all very creative and beautiful. Some of it's too deep for me, some is over my head, and some is within my domain. That's my limitation, not yours. All of your writing is excellent.

Rick Ryckman (71.97.24.121) -- Wednesday, November 22 2006, 03:36 am

Barb
I appreciate your kind feedback.
I put my writings into two categories.
What I call ---- love and hard.
They come from my life's experiences.

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