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My Shining Star 2
23 September, 2003
Author: Del

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In this crazy messed up world of ours,
My bright shining star is you.
You're my halo of inspiration
In everything I do.

You're like the crystal clear water,
That flows from mountain streams,
And like the silvery moonlight,
That lightens up my dreams.

You're always kind and gentle,
When you make love to me.
The rapture I feel every time,
Is really quite new to me.

My knight in shining armor,
I won't share with anyone,
My sweetheart from heaven,
Who's always so much fun.

Come walk along besides me,
Thru the doorway of tomorrows.
Let us share our happiness,
And together endure our sorrows

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive Ringshall (63.184.1.197, 2) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 02:27 pm

A thought

Another great flow of passion, well done Del thank you
Martin Vann (171.75.208.78) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 02:53 pm

Very, Classy work

Del,

Enjoyed this work and I wish I had come up with, "Come walk along beside me thru the door way of tomorrows," That is a Classy line. The whole poem is beautiful.

MartinV
 
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