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Love So Rare
15 October, 2003
Author: Del

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Sweetheart, the love I share with you,
Is so rare, it seems unreal.
I just could never ever explain
Exactly the way I feel.

This love is so very different,
I'm never sad or blue.
I feel so happy every day
Whenever I think of you.

There's something my heart keeps telling me,
'Be careful, keep it cool,
You know this love is not for you,
Don't be a silly fool.'

'But I'm not hurting anyone,'
I talk back to my heart.
'We'll never be together,
We'll always be apart.'

We share our thoughts and feelings,
Each and every day.
I feel you're right besides me,
But you're very far away.

It will never be any different,
But I can't say that I care.
I'll enjoy it while it's here right now,
This very rare love we share

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.87.202) -- Sunday, October 19 2003, 07:01 am

absolutely beautiful....and rare..

i enjoyed this..beautifully written.....thank you for sharing that rare kind of love...
Clive (63.184.1.76, 20) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 02:47 pm

Very Good

I have and do feel this way, very nice and thoughtful
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 10:07 am

Great...

Great way of explaing your rare love...I enjoyed this poem, it was very well written...
 
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